This shit is what I’ve been waiting for and it was worth it. Two fold here.
First the meet up of Christopher and the Rogue. Holy shit. It was explosive and fun as hell to write. Oh spoilers ahead. The Rogue gets his shit kicked in.
Damn. The pace and the events just flowed like a old school R&B slow groove baby making song. I’m telling you this shit was fun to write and read back again.
Second part. The writing. The fucking dialog. Holy shit. Two similar dudes but with different philosophies but a different shade of the same type of man. Hot damn alive.
Hot damn! What a time to be alive!
I waited years to write shit like this. Where the dialog just flows and characters are what they are and say “fuck you” and “deal with it bitch” by just being themselves and not apologizing for standing on what they are.
I wanted Rogue to be a antagonist you could respect and believe him. Think the first Die Hard movie or any character that has a motivation you buy though you might not agree with it’s not banana balls crazy it’s this is what I do to earn money.
The world building is coming along nice though. I hope your enjoying the series for this month. I certainly am.